FelixZophar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stolen Hearts]

Nice song. I wish there was just more of an intro! :)

DjTheDarkFlameMaster responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you like my work, have a nice day!

[Bouncy Tails]

Not bad. The piano in the beginning sounded a bit weird because it went off key. The only other thing that ruined it was the first drop. Those techno sounds don't fit the song. With a bit of effects it could. But the second drop was awesome! What DAW was this made on? Keep it up.

DjTheDarkFlameMaster responds:

I know I'm I responding too late, but I really like the second drop a lot, is pretty cool, have a nice day!

[Varsity - Exiled]

It's cool. The part at 0:17 is muffled like Hippokopter said. It's been blaring out of my speaker and it's serious ear rape. I think the dubstep is cool. Good Job!

Lot7even responds:

Lol this is from ages ago xD

[Big Metal Spaceship]

I actually think this is really cool. I don't write trance, only house and a experimenting on big room but I like it. It's just a bit too repetitive.

Lot7even responds:

It's so bizarre to see reviews of this song.

[The Last Warrior]

Well, not bad for your first song. I think this could become something with a bit of work.

Lot7even responds:

I posted this exactly one year ago today.

[-V- Aobiestep [Brostep]]

Wow, nice bro! I like it! If I had FL like you, I could make stuff like this. But right now I'm using an older version of auxy. Maybe I could use FL mobile.

Lot7even responds:

FL mobile is around 15 bucks. I'd say it's better to just save for the PC/mac one.

[-V- Revolt of Riddim]

Wow, I'm surprised. You did so well on this song. I like it! But it's a little too repetitive.

Lot7even responds:

You, a bit repetitive. Thanks!

[Gusfrabba]

The entire time it's just loud and looped.

RedSoul92 responds:

It's called ambient

[Lost in the Deep]

I think this is actually really good. I think your pretty good.

MoroniAngelGD responds:

Thx!

[Rock Dat]

Pretty Cool!
I can read in your description that this was made in FL Studio, being your first time making it. Just by the beginning I can tell that you actually care about how your music and melodies sound. But you did also say that the mixing is not very good. But I'm just going to walk through this entire song and tell you what I liked and didn't like.
In the beginning I like that chord that faded in. But I wish that melody didn't come in so fast though. I enjoy the melody synth once it comes in. I like the melody. I just wish it were a bit louder because the sweeper is basically making it so you can barely hear it. The bass needs to be filtered just a bit, and it needs a bit more reverb.
At 0:31 is my favorite part because the synth that comes in is so cool. I like that synth. I just think it needs more reverb. But you should have made automatons to the other synth from the beginning because the synth from the beginning kind of ruins it with it's delay effect.
The build up is not to bad. The drums are a bit too loud. But a tip I would give is to highpass everything, not just the snare.
Now the drop is not too good. I would recommend watching a few tutorials. A good person I would recommend watching would be Panos Savvidis, he makes great FL Studio tutorials and I learned a lot from him to improve my drop. But I've never used FL Studio, but I have used Ableton Live. I'm not going to be harsh on you because it's your first time using FL Studio.
After the drop you basically add in another instrument and the rest of the song is based off from the drop. You should have created another melody. Though it wouldn't really fit in because this song is very short.
Overall, not bad. I'm going to listen to some of your other songs and see what I think. Not bad for your first time using FL Studio. Keep working!

MoroniAngelGD responds:

Thx! ill try making better songs in the future with your help!