I thought the intro melodies were good. The buildup wrecked the rest of the song. Really distorted along with frequency clashing. Same thing with the drop. The drop was really unattractive and lame. Some volume adjustments are necessary along with some eqing. Some of the percussion did not fit. It sounds like you just slapped a bunch of loops down and just decided to post it, which I’ve heard from many people that you used to do that. I also think you need to slow down with releasing tracks. There’s no need to rush. Take your time and work on your projects, and put in a good effort. Make sure the mix is also good. I encourage you to do better next time and not rush everything.