FelixZophar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tall Tale]

I like that creepy synth in the background. It sounds really cool. The drums are a nice little groove! Nice job!

Hedrix responds:

Thanks. The synth was actually a reversed piano.

[BRASS]

Okay not bad. I think the song is too long. I feel the part from 0:00 to 1:35 was too long and too empty. But it's not bad. I think this song could have been shortened by a lot. But not bad.

Kysertron responds:

yeah, that is kind of the thing with TFZ+JK collabs, the repetition gets very out there, so we may keep a watch of that in future TFZ+JK collabs ;)

compared to the other TFZ+JK collabs, this may the best, maybe tied Plasma Sword (our best collab): https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/775642

Originally, we were only playing it to be called Plasma Sword 2 (with a very similar drop to Plasma Sword), and only have one long drop that covers around half of the song. We decided, instead, to do two drops, the latter better than the first.

[Time Eater]

I like the chipstepness. It's really cool. I like the video game genre in general. At 1:52, it just began to get really weird. Tip: Don't just keep on adding in random instruments. I would keep a song like this at a limit of five instruments, because this genre isn't hardcore like house or dubstep. And I've had to tell a lot of people not to do this. Because I learned from experience. But I liked it. Good job!

TheFantasticZ responds:

I used 4 instruments ._.

[Silent One]

Wow, this is cool. I like this. I think you work well as a soloist. But when you get further into the song, don't just add random instruments.

ORI-TAGGART responds:

Thank you for all the reviews man! I was gone for awhile and I wasn't expecting this! I think it's safe to assume my main problem is the progression of the songs and it's understandable. I'm still trying to improve so thank you again for the reviews! It is much appreciated. :D

[Nimble Nimbus OST - Sleepy Cirrus]

Not bad. I like it. What's the game gonna be called and when will it be released?

RJ-Dub responds:

Thank you! And no title or release date yet, but it's a scrolling shooter where you play as a cloud (hence the title of this piece)

[-Retro-]

Sweet! This is really cool. I like the video game theme.

dupreedraws responds:

Thanks. I focused primarily on MIDI sounds while making it, to give it that feel.

[Hyper Jungle]

Nice drum loop. I like this little drum loop. It's a nice tune. But instead of putting it as a song and making it 1:30, you could have made it a loop. Nice job!

dupreedraws responds:

Thank you. I plan on doing more songs in the future, so I could maybe make that one a loop.

[DashSlayer25 - Sirus]

I think this one was a lot better than empire. This one has a nice melody chords and nice drums. The drop does need a bit of touch up, and it's way too lengthy. I would try and keep your drops under 30 seconds, and 8 - 16 bars (measures). And it's way too repetitive, but I'm not going to criticize you for that because I really like the melody. Good job! Keep up the good work!

DashSlayer25 responds:

Thank you very much for the support!
Once Again Im Trying My Best To Make My Music Perfect. And Yes Your Right The Drops Are Lengthy. ill Make My Drops Shorter Next Time! But Thank you very much for the support! ;)

[DashSlayer25 - Empire]

Pretty good. I think the intro sounds not very good. The melody sounds nice. But those dubstep growlers ruin the melody. I can tell you don't know very much about making buildups and drops. But this isn't bad. You definitely have potential. Keep working!

DashSlayer25 responds:

Thank you ;) oh btw check out the remix above. tell me how you like that one. I think that's my best song so far

[The Loner's Lullaby]

This is really relaxing and peaceful. I like the piano, but you could have some reverb.

Noisysundae responds:

Are you listening in mono? Because the reverb is all in the side channel. I'm not sure if it's a good idea to have it in the mid.