FelixZophar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lost in the Deep]

I think this is actually really good. I think your pretty good.

MoroniAngelGD responds:

Thx!

[Rock Dat]

Pretty Cool!
I can read in your description that this was made in FL Studio, being your first time making it. Just by the beginning I can tell that you actually care about how your music and melodies sound. But you did also say that the mixing is not very good. But I'm just going to walk through this entire song and tell you what I liked and didn't like.
In the beginning I like that chord that faded in. But I wish that melody didn't come in so fast though. I enjoy the melody synth once it comes in. I like the melody. I just wish it were a bit louder because the sweeper is basically making it so you can barely hear it. The bass needs to be filtered just a bit, and it needs a bit more reverb.
At 0:31 is my favorite part because the synth that comes in is so cool. I like that synth. I just think it needs more reverb. But you should have made automatons to the other synth from the beginning because the synth from the beginning kind of ruins it with it's delay effect.
The build up is not to bad. The drums are a bit too loud. But a tip I would give is to highpass everything, not just the snare.
Now the drop is not too good. I would recommend watching a few tutorials. A good person I would recommend watching would be Panos Savvidis, he makes great FL Studio tutorials and I learned a lot from him to improve my drop. But I've never used FL Studio, but I have used Ableton Live. I'm not going to be harsh on you because it's your first time using FL Studio.
After the drop you basically add in another instrument and the rest of the song is based off from the drop. You should have created another melody. Though it wouldn't really fit in because this song is very short.
Overall, not bad. I'm going to listen to some of your other songs and see what I think. Not bad for your first time using FL Studio. Keep working!

MoroniAngelGD responds:

Thx! ill try making better songs in the future with your help!

[Sad Machine Remix]

Wow! I love it! This reminded me of the old song. I don't really like the vocal fx though. Great job!

Red65 responds:

thanks man! I'll try and do my best on vocals if I use them again :)

[My Cucumbers are Alive (71011-NINJER and Gougou Collab)]

This is not bad. I think it's way too repetitive. This reminds me a lot of 80's music.

Gougou responds:

ok
thanks for the comment

[-V- Venom Symbiote]

You infidelity need to improve this a bit. This song sounded very off beat. I don't like the drums. I think that the main melody growler could use just a tiny bit of touch up. But my least favorite part was the ending. The ending just dropped. You could have filtered it out at the ending, which I do sometimes. But I think with work, you can become really good!

Lot7even responds:

Yup. I agree.

The offbeat thing- that is riddim. IT didn't turn out well, though. This definitely is not the best of my songs. I liked the growler, but a little extra sound design could've done well. As for the ending, yep I should have done some weird percussion and a bandpass.

Thanks for taking the time to review!

[Ways]

I like this song. I think it's pretty good. I'm more into the house, big room, and chillstep genres. I like this, but I think it would be better if you added a bit more and didn't loop it so much. I would like it more if you at least added a bit of drums. Just saying. Overall, I like it!

NoteBreaker responds:

Thanks for the review! I was more focusing on really classical music and I wanted it to have some real instruments. So the drums are are really not so necessery, trust me I tried adding drums, but it didn't sound so emotional. Thanks again!

[Tokyo Takedown]

Boomkitty, I've listened to a few of your songs. This song is pretty good. The only problem I have with this song is it feels very empty. I don't like it when songs feel empty. Obviously you have a lot of big software so you're all good with writing awesome music. I don't have the greatest software so it takes me a long time to make something sound really cool. But I wish this song had more of a feeling to it.
In my opinion, this reminded me more of China, but I'll leave that up to you. I do think the drop was also too empty. But the ending of this song was good. I could definitely tell this was you by the drums in the beginning. But overall, this song is not bad. But it definitely is not at it's full potential

[Still Haven't Learned how to Make a Title]

Well, it's a little too quiet. The melody is okay. Do you know what a scale is? If you don't, then you need to learn some. This song sounds like it's changing scale a lot. But I like the synths. Did you create this recently, because it says you used FL Studio 12. FL Studio 20 just came out if you didn't know. Nice!

Jmunnster responds:

I really do need to brush up on my scales again.

[Never Die Demo (feat. Droid)]

This song reminds me a lot of NF's Let Me Down. I like the hi hat. I don't like the melody, but I like the rap. The melody doesn't fit the song. Rap isn't my thing, but I think is okay.

[press-start]

HEY STOP!!!
This is not your song. Don't think you can steal this and get away with it. This is copyright protected!

licoelkill responds:

hou not sap but it was only to try to create with this music in level in geometry dash but if so I have to remove it from the server thanks for the comment