FelixZophar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[For Them (NGRMC Remix)]

I didn't exactly like that long intro. I like it when it all came in at 1:08. That part was really nice. I loved that part with all the strings! I wish the melody where the violins came in just had some vibrato. I then like that big impact! It just lit up the whole song! I feel like an orchestra could play this! But there are still some flaws. But this was awesome!

SplatterDash responds:

Hey, thank you for reviewing this! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and that there were some good things I can improve on from this. I actually used some VSTs for the first time - the one with the strings was DSK Overture. I was still trying to get used to it when I was making this, so I didn't realize there were some knobs (like the vibrato) in certain areas. Hopefully I'll utilize them in later works :)

I've mentioned to ADR3-N that the reason why I had the long intro was because of a piece I was inspired by called Atlas. That piece can be found here: https://youtu.be/Bw2Up2BRRII I feel like I know now how to not make the intro as long, so in pieces like this I know now how to start it off good and short.

Again, thank you for judging this and for running NGRMC! Looking forward to coming back next year :D

[I Can Dream, And So Can You]

Well, not too bad. There is some stuff you do need to work on. You're off tempo, that's a major factor. And the mixing isn't that good. Besides that I liked the melodies they were really nice. I'd like to see this preformed at a piano concert. Not bad for a first song.

[Epitome]

So you wrote and recorded this? Or is it a remix.

DezerszGmd responds:

Just a remix :D.

[RoblesK - Hopes (Techno)]

Well, not the greatest. There are a few parts that need to be improved. I don't think the synths are that good. But I like the melody.

Radius responds:

thanks

[An Anagram]

Well some parts are off scale but I like the rest. Nice job!

MRM3 responds:

Thank you!
I agree that some parts are off, I just can't figure out which ones.

[Yes (csx42 Remix)]

Wow. This is amazing! I didn't think it would be this good! :)

[H4D_2_G0 (NGRMC Remix)]

[ Official NGRMC Review ]

Awesome dude! I really liked this remix you did. I like that intro, and some of the glitchyness you did to the melody. I like the slow tempo, and the ending when it fades out and then comes back in. I just think the gitches were happening way too much. Maybe a few times. But not like ten.
Overall. Amazing! I like this! Continue your journey through music!
Thanks!
Zophar

GoodL responds:

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) I can see your point about the glitches being over the top. If we're being honest though, if I had it my way it would be even glitchier! But I can totally understand that not everyone would be super into that. Thanks again, this competition is really awesome and I'm happy to be a part of it.

[Yoda12 - Flower (NGRMC Remix)]

[ Official NGRMC Review ]

This is a joke. I know that. Putting memes in it obviously makes it a joke. This is just some random recordings put into samplers. It's hard to tell what is what. And what did you say about me? "Zophar is very good at writing melodies?" This song is not fitting my ears.
Overall. Don't do this again. This is a joke. I know that. But, I cannot take it.

midimachine responds:

this is a serious effort pls dont write troll reviews

[DashSlayer25 - Pain]

The dubstep is too repetitive. This doesn't exactly give me a feeling of pain. It needs a different title. This dubstep is very tame. But if it were extreme dubstep, then it would fit! Nice though!

[Dynamisis (NGRMC)]

[ Official NGRMC Review ]

This was a nice remix! I liked listening. Through this remix I saw a lot of improvement in you! You did a really nice job. But there are sill some cons though. I like that intro when it comes in. But I don't like the dry kick in the beginning. I wish you chose a more lowpass filtered kick. That buildup was nice. I like the drop and the sidechain.
Overall. Nice job! I thought that the kick wasn't a good kick. But that's okay. Your buildup does need some improvement. And instrument select. But nice job!
Thanks!
Zophar

MRM3 responds:

I do want to say that I have bad headphones, and so, my mixing is never how it sounds to me.
That being said...
I agree that I should have done a low-pass on the kick. I really don't like it either (I was able to listen to it on a different device after uploading it)
The buildup is trash, being honest.
I don't really know how to make a good riser, other than to automate the pitch of a sine note, and the freq. of a FM hi-passed noise sound.
Would there be a chance that I could make a few changes, and then re-submit it?
If so, then, Thanks!😁
-MRM3