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Mix needs serious work. It is terribly distorted and loud.

Cool idea overall. There is a triangle hit that has a frequency which is really annoying to my ears. Mixing is good. There are some minor mixing issues, but not many. Don't make the kick stereo. If I'm being honest, swap it out and eq it. Turn the claps up a bit. They were a little quiet. Wetness was well mixed. The main thing I'm looking at is where the song is peeking. The song could be way louder than it actually is, which is what I would do if I were you. If you look, there is a very steady top. You could draw a line above it basically, and a few lines would peak over. I'd recommend turning it up to where that line would be, and then putting a soft clipper on. That way, it will be louder and more compressed. Nice work man.

FLAVOUR-STAR responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I tried to implement your suggestions. I hope you like it.

If I'm being honest, in the beginning make the pad lowpass in before the percussion. Kick needs to be boosted a bit in the low-mid range. The lead in 49 needs major eqing. There is way too much high. The riser is cool. The fill is a bit too loud. If it were me making this song, I would have made the drop pads lowpass filter into the song. Drop needs to be mixed better. The kick needs to be louder, I can barely hear it. There is way too much white noise in the drop. Definitely swap out those pads, they don't fit well with the leads. Speaking of the leads, they're too dry. Add some reverb, but don't oversimplify it. Breakdown after the drop is good. Second buildup, same with the first. Second drop, same with the first. Outro is cool, but again, that bell lead is too loud. To be honest, that outro was too compressed. Overall it was a nice idea, and I give you a lot of credit for that. But the mixing needs improvement. I think it would sound really cool with some transitions because it was lacking a lot of that. Overall it was okay.

planetofficial responds:

thank you so much :)

That main melody is kind of a chliche of every other melody out there. The siren in the beginning is too loud. Synths need some eqing. Bass needs to be louder. The riser is the second buildup is too loud. The white noise release in the drops is too loud. Second drop is hella cool. Kinda wish the melody would change every now and then. Maybe add a second melody. It seems really repetitive. In the 3rd drop, the lead bass is stereo. Never make your basses stereo. Overall it was a cool idea, but the mixing needs a lot of work. If I'm being honest, I would have chose different PWM pads. Overall cool song, but mixing needs work.

Martingamer996 responds:

I'm not so creative after all, that's why, the riser in the second buildup is because i pitched it a bit, i didn't add a white noise, maybe you confused the downlifter with a white noise, i didnt add a 3rd drop ._. and thx for all these things you said, it would help me in the future :)

It's alright. Melodies are out of tune in some areas. Notes clashing with each other. The kick was making the rest of the mix distorted. Some parts of the percussion were a little too quiet. Some synths need eqing and volume adjustments. Overall it's okay.

It's good. Mixing needs work. Especially eqing frequencies. Also it's not really "Trap" but more house. Not bad bro. Keep up the good work.

RealGares responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)

Oh damn. Oh damn. Oh Daayyyum. Ma boi AlieN be bringing in the heat. Love this bro, great work!

AlienNinjaGD responds:

ye this one turned well thankee boi

Not bad my friend. Fun little song to listen to. :)

Oh wow this makes me bounce. Please more dad.

This is some good stuff bro

AlienNinjaGD responds:

ayy thanks dude!

I use FL Studio and fl mobile along with Flash 8 for animating. My geometry dash account is FelixZophar if you want to play with me. If you want to send me a sample to flip for trap bangers email it to me. Make it more chords and less melodic.

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